Subaru Sumeragi (皇 昴流) ([info]su_chan) wrote,
@ 2007-06-06 12:55:00
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Even having part of the script was harder than I expected :-/ and I got so sad ;_; anyway, here it is:



Tsubasa 155: Unlucky Twins


Pag3:
Kid: you killed (me)

Pag4:
Yui's memories: Although in our country, Valeria, everybody was anticipating...
The King's younger brother's (1) prince birth //// ((1) the reading of the kanji is 'emperor' )
Even the King's older brother (2) was looking forward to it //// ((2) reading is 'pope')
Why had to be twins?

Pag5:
Yui: The King's younger brother's suddenly passed away by illness
as expected twins are a bad omen
fields were not producing
water became impure
the King's younger brother's wife killed herself
for having given birth to twin princes
this was like missfortune


Pag6:
Yui: as expected, a bad omen
Twins are a bad omen
besides they posses powerful magic
soon after being born if the two of them combined their magic they ranked next to the already emperor of Valeria, the king's older borther.
If they grew to adulthood the emperor would be surpased without knowing.
That caused unhappyness, missfortune
They led father and mother to dead and will collapse the country

Pag7:
However if killed the disaster would increase

Pag8:
Emperor: Twins of unhappyness
you'll be imprisoned
to bear all the disasters the body of the missfortune will be sealed
Twins are a missfortune
As a consecuence of your magic power you'll have a long life, a missfortune
That you were born was a missfortune

pag9:
emperor: only if the twins are unhappy
the country will be able to be a happy and prosper one
this is a curse
the twins will be separeted in each place
of the valley where magic is not efective
and time flow is different
one up and the other down <= Added, I forgot! u_u;

pag10
emperor: The twins life has to be unhappy for
everyone happyness

pag11:
the valley is a ground of criminals
to those who perpretrated crimes there was not a resting tomb
there without rotting, only thrown away inside to stay
that was the criminal's fate

pag12:
emperor: in this country the most cursed place
you'll also be there, only then 'life will continue'
There is an option
if you dislike that...
kill one, any of you

Pag14:
Emperor: So then
To the valley with them
From there will never be able to exit
Until the world is destroyed

pag15
Yui: here there is not a living person
the living one is...

pag16:
Yui: leave... from here...
if we could leave from here we could use magic
it was told if we grow we will surpass the emperors magic
and then to other countries

pag17:
Yui: we'lll go together
Fay!!!!!

Pag18:
Fay: ...Yuui...

Pag19:
Yui: Why all at once like this?
Something happened to Valeria?


I see true!Fay as the weaker twin while, as we already know, Fay was the stronger.... and they were SO CUTE!!! yay! how could they throw them to such cruel place? *hides them*


EDIT: Added a missing line!



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[info]jlarinda
2007-06-06 11:13 am UTC (link)
;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~; They chose to go together rather than killing either of them and saving themselves from that terrible fate..

*WIBBLE*

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[info]jlarinda
2007-06-06 11:13 am UTC (link)
ALSO thank you for the translation! ♥

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(no subject) - [info]su_chan, 2007-06-06 01:51 pm UTC

[info]rinelin
2007-06-06 11:13 am UTC (link)
I would gladly take them with me if I had a chance <3 They are so adorable *_* Valeria is a cruel country >_>
Thank You for the translation! :D

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 01:52 pm UTC (link)
if they were available for being adopted *sigh* besides they seeem to be so quiet, polite and cute... kid!kuro was too noisy and mischievous xDDDDD

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[info]jasetsi
2007-06-06 11:35 am UTC (link)
Thanks!
And that really had to be some cruel bastards to decide to keep those cute, cute kids in such a place T_T
(and there would be tons of fangirls more than willing to adopt them, I think^_~)

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[info]r_u_k_i_a
2007-06-06 11:37 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much for the translation!

As I said before, I think that being separated was worse for the twins than being imprisoned. It's so cruel that the only way for them to get out of the tower was killing one of them *huggles the cute little princelings*

On a lighter note, poor Kuro is not from royalty, I'm afraid that Ashura-ou may refuse if he asks for Fay's hand XDDD

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[info]blue_sirius
2007-06-06 11:52 am UTC (link)
Kurogane is indeed not royality, but he´s nobility after all. ^_^

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[info]shisanka
2007-06-06 11:45 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

Even though they are both adorable to no ends, I like Yuui better. I just hope he really is the Fai who has been travelling with the others up till now!
But then again, if he wasn't , it wouldn't be terrible either. :D

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[info]shisanka
2007-06-06 12:00 pm UTC (link)
You know I have that awful teory, that the Fai who has been travelling with them is true!Fai and Yuui is the one who died. And that would be horrible, considering Yuui tried so hard to reach his brother and Fai just chose himself (Which I can't really believe either). It will all be cleared up when the twin who is with Ashura calls Fai's name. Either Fai or Yuui...

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(no subject) - [info]shisanka, 2007-06-06 12:14 pm UTC
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(no subject) - [info]shisanka, 2007-06-06 02:22 pm UTC
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(no subject) - [info]shisanka, 2007-06-06 02:26 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]jlarinda, 2007-06-06 02:36 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-06-06 11:50 am UTC (link)
Kuro may not be from royalty, but he is still a noble (young lord of Suwa).

Are we so sure that our Fye is the strongest? We know he hides many things, maybe also his fears. So in that case we would know the true Fye fromthe beginning, and Yuui was the one who died. Remember chap133 has shown clearly true!Fye in the cell, whereas in chap148 we don't know exactly where the twin is.

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 01:34 pm UTC (link)
that was Clamp trasing us, Fay is the one being protrayed in this chapter, the bottom one...

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[info]kei_san77
2007-06-06 11:55 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much for the translation!
The twins were too cute, the court was jalous, that's why they were sent away! Yeah, that's it!

More seriously, I can't help but think of FWR & "Fay"'s pact. We still don't know Fye's answer... and I can't believe he chose to sacrifice his twin! I mean, he refused when the emperor asked them - but some could say that they were really young back then, and that they didn't know what was waiting for them. More importantly, he seems so determined to climb up, save his twin and leave together... Has Fye really chosen to "erase [his twin's] life"?!

I should be working for my exams ^^' , and instead I'm here, questionning myself... Clamp really are mean...

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[info]aniki_kurai
2007-06-06 12:24 pm UTC (link)
thanks for translation su_chan ^___^
i always translate for myself anyways but this chapter is just too sad, i can't even look at it anymore
cute little kid on the pile of corpses... '__'

i'm beginning to get comfused which one of the twins is our Fay and which one had the deal with FWR...
also interesting about the bodies of the criminals. they don't rot just because the valley is cursed or does it have anything to do with Fay's magic. Maybe his twin didn't die but became zombie because of that too.

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 02:13 pm UTC (link)
must be the valley.. I spent a bit with that line, it was clearly 'not rot' so most probaly is the valley's, that is why they send them there....

the kid with bloddy fingers and being below is yuui, the one who died is the other... so Fay is the one actually named Yui

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(no subject) - [info]aniki_kurai, 2007-06-06 03:16 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]su_chan, 2007-06-06 03:31 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]aniki_kurai, 2007-06-06 04:55 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]su_chan, 2007-06-07 03:41 pm UTC

[info]lovelessinma
2007-06-06 12:24 pm UTC (link)
Gracias por traducirlo! (^O^) *le da a Su-chan el oscar a la fan de TRC más dedicada*
Qué cosa más adorable de niños, dan ganas de darles un abrazo... son dos peluches (ToT)
Este capítulo me hizo llorar, cuando se dan las manitas... ...(T________T;;;

Por cierto, lo que dice el hermanito de Fay al principio, creo que CLAMP se las ha apañado para hacernos pensar que la frase completa es "tú me mataste", pero seguro que cuando acabe el flashback y sepamos qué ocurrió exactamente nos repiten la frase esta vez poniéndole el objeto directo y nos dan la vuelta a la tortilla como siempre (= w=U
El japonés es tan ambigüo a veces, qué rabia (._.;;

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 01:35 pm UTC (link)
yap! por eso puse el 'me' entre parentesis.... no estoy tan segura.... solo esoty segura que el de abajo es el que salio, osea FAy....

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[info]engwanoviel
2007-06-06 12:28 pm UTC (link)
Clamp really knows how to floor a person....i don't know, but i'm starting to think, they've made it a law throughtout all mangas for twins to each have their happy ending....look at chobits, tb, and now this. hmm still, they wereee sooo cuteeeeeeee, i sooo despise that FWR, he did it, it's all his fault just like with kurogane's past.

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[info]infini_iv
2007-06-06 12:29 pm UTC (link)
Someone probably already mentioned this before, but does this mean that everyone is going to have to go to the dead body place again to get Sakura's body? It's kind of dead, right? What if it ended up in the pile with all the rest, ew. XD Or maybe not, it might not be completely dead yet I guess.

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 02:16 pm UTC (link)
there is where they threw the criminals... SAkura is not a criminal....

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(no subject) - [info]infini_iv, 2007-06-06 10:17 pm UTC

[info]ariadnechan
2007-06-06 12:45 pm UTC (link)
wow esto es rapidez no lo leere ahora pues son las 8 am y hay como -2 grados bajo cero pero muchas gracias !!!!!

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[info]taijimana
2007-06-06 12:47 pm UTC (link)
I can understand the twin thing but... how many brothers are there?

It sounds like there are 3. The younger brother, Fay and Yuy's father, the King and the Emperor. As much as I'd like that to be true (and for them to have a nice uncle and an evil uncle) Japanese is a funny language like that and my understanding of it can't figure it out on my own.

Is there only 1 elder brother the Kyouou who is also the Ou (Emperor)of the country and the Teiou the younger brother who is Fai and Yuy's father?

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[info]morgif_kun
2007-06-06 12:49 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for the translation and the link to the scans ♥

...I know everything points to the opposite but... what if the twin's still alive? Maybe time passed differently in that valley? So that (our) Fai would have grown up more quickly after being released (like what happened in Clover with the twins) while the other remained a kid? His death could have been faked by FWR to guilt-trip Fai!

Uuuuh, screw canon, I just want them to be a happy family again TT____TT

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[info]clamp_yuuko
2007-06-06 12:57 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for the transelation! ^^ Haven't seen the scans yet, mediafire is being a bitch, but he transelation is still awesome!

I wonder, is thw twins cursed because their power would be stronger than the emperor or is it just because they are twins?

*goes to see if Mediafire is nice again ^^*

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[info]spankmayer
2007-06-06 01:03 pm UTC (link)
thank you so much for translation!

bravo, Clamp, they are really masters and artists
i'm starting to tremble before a chapter opening already)

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[info]lodelco
2007-06-06 01:14 pm UTC (link)
NO! Those poor babies! T_T

I see true!Fay as the weaker twin while, as we already know, Fay was the stronger.... and they were SO CUTE!!! yay! how could they throw them to such cruel place? *hides them*

If true!Fay was the eldest while Fay was the youngest that would make sense. Crimson Butterfly. Again.

DX Its impossible for me to believe that the twins actually DID cause misfortune. They were supposed to more powerful than the emperor right? How do we know that he didn't cause that stuff on purpose just so he could get rid of the twins?

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[info]chitose_atsuko
2007-06-06 01:28 pm UTC (link)
T_____T
Qué potito! Son la cosa más mona del mundo mundial!
;_____;
Vaya llorera...
En fin, más fan por una nueva tradu.

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[info]kinoha
2007-06-06 01:28 pm UTC (link)
Wah! ;_; so cruel!!! They are sooooo cute!!!
Thank you for the translation &hearts

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[info]eriol33
2007-06-06 01:35 pm UTC (link)
thanks for the translation, and dont you think this reminds you of SaGa Frontier? (rpg by Squaresoft if you played it, that's it =3).

I remember one of the story tells story of magician named Blue from Magic Kingdom who is destined to kill his own twin to achieve the title of Magician King, but in the end, it was revealed that they are originally a single being, only their soul splitted. I wonder if this arc would turn up like that as well...

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[info]spritecans
2007-06-06 02:12 pm UTC (link)


-squee-

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 02:55 pm UTC (link)
too cute to be real ^___^

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[info]geblitzt
2007-06-06 02:14 pm UTC (link)
....Alright. My brain is about to explode.

Why is the twin at the bottom calling up to "Fai"? When in Chapter 148, we assume that Fai is the one below, the one who watched his brother fall from the tower to his death, to bear the curse?

Well, I have this very weird theory. What if...dun dun dun, the one at the bottom really was Yuui and he was the one who let Fai fall to his death and when Ashura showed up, swaped his life -somehow- for Fai's in guilt? It's complicated and most probably wrong but it's possible...

But then why does the twin kid say "You Killed Me?" CLAMP, we need answers~! I'm dying over this chapter. I mean, does this mean Fai isn't really Fai?! No, that cannot be true, can it? -clutches head- Fai must be Fai....

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 02:55 pm UTC (link)
becasue he changed his name to be able to leave the hole 'with' brother ^__________^

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[info]questix
2007-06-06 02:35 pm UTC (link)
I know what happened. Here it is:

FWR: You have to choose between you two. Who lives, and who dies.
True!Fay: Choose Yui, he's my beloved brother... I want him to live!
Our!Fay: *goes to say the oposite but gets a bubble stuck in his throat and coughs instead*
True!Fay: *SPLAT!!!*
FWR: You have chosen to erase that life!
Our!Fay: O.O NOOOOO!!!

...okay, maybe not... *gets beaten with metal pipes*

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[info]geblitzt
2007-06-06 02:42 pm UTC (link)
XD XD XD Shame, man.

But it's true, in a way. No matter if our Fai is Yui or not...He'll always remain our Fai. The...true Fai. I just...can't possibly imagine him being called Yui. He's FAI~! -cries- I am so confused. How am I ever going to be able to study for French NOW?!?!? TT.TT

But, strangely every time with CLAMP, we rake our brains dead and the next chapter comes with the most genius and simple explanation and we all go "Ooooh, riiight~!" XD

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[info]fantasy2004
2007-06-06 02:48 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I noticed that the king's face reminds me of fei wong *the way the beard looks, it looks like his*

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[info]su_chan
2007-06-06 02:53 pm UTC (link)
is pure coincidence... he reminds me of a nordic god.. Thor or Odin....

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(no subject) - [info]taijimana, 2007-06-06 07:54 pm UTC

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